Thursday, October 28, 2010

Stork as Bird of War?


Here's a video from the "Voluntary Human Extinction Movement," which Roszak references in his article, "Green Guilt and Ecological Overload":

George Carlin on "The Earth"


Here's a clip from the comedian, George Carlin:

Thursday, September 16, 2010

Julia Butterfly Hill: Adventures in Tree Sitting




You'll find a 3-part documentary here about Julia "Butterfly" Hill's protest as well as a NBC Dateline feature. See page 45 in our text for more information.

What do you think of Hill's protest?


Part 1

Part 2


Part 3

Dateline News Feature

Environmental News on the Web




As Cox indicates, environmental issues routinely make the news (13).


I'll keep a running list of blogs that Cox and others reference. Hopefully, the list will be a good resource for you. If nothing else, you might skim some of the entries to get a feel for the genre of the blog post:

Dot Earth

A blog hosted by the NY Times.

Environment News Network

This blog reports on issues such as health, green technology, energy, and wildlife.

Grist.org

Grist reports on environmental news with a not so subtle touch of sarcasm.


National Geographic: Daily News


You'll find recent environmental news here--and award-winning photography.

Shannon-Weaver Model of Communication

Compare to p. 20 in your text, and our discussions about "language as symbolic action":


Monday, September 13, 2010

Clean Coal Ads, Pro and Con





This advertisement is funded by Americas for Balanced Energy Choices


This advertisement is from AmericasPower.Org

This advertisement is from ThinkReality, and so this one.




This news feature is from CBS News.


On pages 20 and 22 of your text, you'll notice that Cox argues for a two-part definition of environmental communication. On the one hand, it's pragmatic. That is, communication, such as the ads above, are intended to change or solidify an opinion. Such ads often solicit support for a cause--vote or candidate X or donate money to organization Y. On the other hand, environmental communication is "constitutive." That is, the words and images of the ads appeal to a set of commonplace understandings about the United States and about the natural world. In other words, viewers understand the issue of coal-based energy production by means of these and similar ads. In that sense, language is not transparent but a form of "symbolic action" (20-22).

Review these ads and write an analysis of the the symbolic action in the ads. Coal--after all--is just a rock. But coal is also and inevitably a symbol. How do the ads position this symbol?

Monday, September 6, 2010

Leopold's "Thinking Like Mountain"

Aldo Leopold was a naturalist and writer. The short essay "Thinking Like A Mountain" is quoted in your textbook on page 26.

Click the above link and read the entire essay. On the discussion board, write a paragraph in which you describe the way in which Cox uses Leopold as a source for his argument.

Why did Cox choose Leopold? How did he incorporate Leopold's text into his own? How does your experience with the whole essay differ from your encounter with the quotation?

Can Audi Outrun the Green Police?

Here's a YouTube link to an Audi advertisement that ran during the 2010 superbowl.

Can you evaluate this ad in ways that are consistent with Cox's suggestions on page 16?

What are the pragmatic appeals (think logos, pathos, ethos)? To what "dominant discourse[s]" does the ad appeal?

Environmental Communication In the News

On the opening pages of Chapter 1, Cox notes that the environmental news appears regularly on the pages of major news magazines. Here's a list of just a few recent stories from the New York Times.

You see articles related to coal, owls, champagne, and an environmental disaster (the recent Gulf Coast Oil Spill).

Suppose we wanted to categorize or tag these and related stories. What tags would you use? What other types of environmental news stories, not depicted above, do you typically see? What tags would we give these stories?

Tuesday, August 31, 2010

Welcome to WSC 1

Dear Students,

I keep this blog as a way to organize and communicate web-based content to the class. As such, I aim to make the blog a good resource for you when composing essays and short assignments.

You can look through old posts via the search feature, by date, or by the tag cloud at the bottom of the page. Not all posts will be relevant to our particular class, but you should be able to locate relevant posts easily enough.

You can access a link to the blog through the Blackboard portal.

The Lorax



A video version of Dr. Seuss's well known story The Lorax.










If you enjoy The Jon Stewart Show, you might like this short clip as well. The clip is obviously much shorter than The Lorax and the two are not directly comparable--except that they both deal with images of trees and logging. I'm interested, however, in the way in which the Stewart clip--however short--makes its argument. Any ideas?

Tuesday, July 6, 2010

Quotations and Context

YouTube and Context

A good article about the importance of context when quoting sources (or, in this case, professors)

Monday, June 14, 2010

"Hell Hath No Limits"

This article was selected for The Best Science and Nature Writing series (2209).

Faustian Economics: Hell Hath No Limits. By Wendell Berry. Harper's Magazine. May 2008.

Animal Cruety and Human Empahty



The Animal-Cruelty Syndrome, by Charles Siebert.

Sunday, June 13, 2010

This Time Is Different

Since we've been looking at Thomas Friedman's work, take a look at this recent column on the Gulf Spill, This Time Is Different. Does it speak to our discussion of a "land ethic." Do you think the Gulf of Mexico has standing?

Some Posts on Environmental Ethics



Image: Bob Holme. "Imagine Earth without people." The New Scientist. 12 October 2006.






A world without people? A blog post by Peter Singer, a bioethicist at Princeton.






This link will take you to a trailer from the documentary "Tapped," which focuses on the bottled water industry.





The image above is taken from an article in Frankly Green.


Tuesday, June 8, 2010

Satire from The Onion.




Green Cigarettes
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Aldo Leopold





A short video about Aldo Leopold and the land that inspired A Sand Country Almanac.





This Leopold-based video is a bit longer (10 minutes) and more of a mini-documentary.

Here's another video which invites you to redefine "environmentalist" and "conservative" in light of Leopold's work.

Monday, June 7, 2010

Greenwashing

Here's a link to a 2008 MTV video about greenwashing (see Ch. 10 345-347).



Here's a satire of green-based advertising.

Here's a discussion of greenwashing, which includes a Colbert satire:


Here's a news feature on the "Six Sins of Greenwashing. (See p. 346 in your text.)

Wednesday, June 2, 2010

Media Frames and the Environment

In this post, you'll see two videos: the first, an interview by Grist magazine, featuring New York Times columnist Tom Friedman. In the second, you'll see a feature piece that involves an Earth First! protest aimed at the logging industry.

How do frames work in each of the clips?

Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Gulf Oil Tragedy

Humor and satire have long been effective rhetorical angles. To this end, here's a clip from the Jon Stewart Show.

This article by Maureen Dowd describes the role of the Minerals Management Service (MMS).

This clip from MSNBC also discusses the MMS.

Here's a video from outside the mainstream media. See what you think. Remember: the focus is on rhetoric, not booming, per se.





Monday, May 24, 2010

View from Mount Holyoke (The Oxbow), 1836



Thomas Cole (1801-1848), oil on canvas 51.5"X76"

What sense of nature and wilderness does Cole's well-known painting convey?

Sunday, May 23, 2010

Julia Butterfly Hill - Adventures In Treesitting




You'll find a 3-part documentary here about Julia "Butterfly" Hill's protest as well as a NBC Dateline feature. See page 45 in our text for more information.

What do you think of Hill's protest?


Part 1

Part 2


Part 3

Dateline News Feature

Saturday, May 22, 2010

Chapter 3: Citizen Suits

We're not going to read all of Cox's third chapter because I'd like to focus on a key issue (so-called "citizen suits").

Read pp. 99-104 in the text.

Then read the following two articles:

1. "Novel Antipollution Tool Is Being Upset by Courts."
By WILLIAM GLABERSON of the New York Times.

2. Christopher Stone's "Should Trees Have Standing." (See class handouts for the article.)

Thursday, May 20, 2010

Wilderness Act 1964

I'll attach a few links about the well-known Wilderness Act, which was pivotal in defining the term "wilderness" as it relates to federally protected land.

The Wilderness Society


A summary of the law from the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service.

You can find the law's full text on our Blackboard site.

Wednesday, May 19, 2010

Blogging about the Environment




As Cox indicates, environmental issues routinely make the news (13).


I'll keep a running list of blogs that Cox and others reference. Hopefully, the list will be a good resource for you. If nothing else, you might skim some of the entries to get a feel for the genre of the blog post:

Dot Earth

A blog hosted by the NY Times.

Environment News Network

This blog reports on issues such as health, green technology, energy, and wildlife.

Grist.org

Grist reports on environmental news with a not so subtle touch of sarcasm.


National Geographic: Daily News


You'll find recent environmental news here--and award-winning photography.

Tuesday, May 18, 2010

A Timeline of Key Moments in Environmental History




A Timeline of Key Moments in Environmental History

Jobs Versus The Enviornment

On page 4 of your text, you'll notice that Cox cites a CNN poll that indicates strong support for environmental issues.

Compare the original text of the article to the way in which Cox cites the article.

How does Cox contextualize this quotation? In other words, how does he use context to shape the reader's interaction with the information in the source article?

Environmental Issues and Human Impact

This link will take you to a film about the relationship between human activity and the natural world.


Environmental Issues and Human Impact
. Films Media Group, 2006. Films On Demand. Web. 18 May 2010. http://digital.films.com/play/6X59ZA.

The film can also be accessed via the Hofstra Library Research Databases. Search for Films on Demand.



Item# 34728

This video looks at urgent environmental concerns facing planet Earth and what people can do to repair the degradation humans have caused. Air and water pollution, the effects of pollution on health and the environment, deforestation and loss of wetlands, ozone depletion and global warming, and the negative impact of agriculture, construction, and recreation/tourism are discussed. The program ends with anti-pollution initiatives like recycling and greater energy efficiency. The key message? Individuals can make a difference! A viewable/printable instructor’s guide is available online. Correlates to National Science Education Standards, National Educational Technology Standards, and Standards for the English Language Arts. A Cambridge Educational Production. (22 minutes) ©2006

Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Study Guide: Final

Study Guide for Final Essay

Write an essay in two parts. You may write as much as you like, but I imagine 1,000-1,200 words would work.

In the first part, define and analyze the term collaboration with reference to at least 2 of the texts we have read this term. You may use my blog posts—which include texts and links to Bakhtin, Kristeva, Barthes, Foucault and others if you like.

In the second part, reflect on your own work with collaborative texts—your study of interpretation (assignment 1), the webtext (assignment 2), and the co-authored story or symposium (assignment 2). To what degree does your experience with collaborative-based writing confirm the theories of collaboration that we have discussed this term? In what ways do your experiences reveal gaps in these theories?


Below you'll find a links and descriptions to blog posts that you mind find useful in preparing the final essay:


1. Monday, January 4, 2010
Bruffee: "Collaborative Learning and the 'Conversation of Mankind'"

Bruffee

This post pre-dates our time together, but it focuses on the Bruffee article that began our semester. Do you agree with Bruffee’s enthusiastic endorsement of collaborative processes?




2. Monday, February 8, 2010

Intertextuality


This post is interesting to contemplate in relationship to several of your projects.

Kristeva writes that “any text is the absorption and transformation of another.” (p. 37). What do you think about such a statement? Do you think it’s true? Did you see this sort of intertextuality play out in your writing this term? Or were the ideas born—more or less—out of your head?


3. Monday, February 8, 2010


Dialogism and Heteroglossia


You’ll find this post relevant to intertextuality. Bakhtin emphasizes “context over text,” which means that meaning itself shifts depending on your perspective. By implication, you—as a writer—are not entirely in control of the meaning of your text.


4. Monday, February 22, 2010
The Pharmakon

Jeff Rice references this word, which both Plato and Derrida use to discuss writing. The term positions writing as both cure and poison.



5. Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Rhetoric of Cool: Ch 2-5

If you’re interested in reflecting on your webtexts (perhaps compare/contrast it to a traditional essay?), then this post will be helpful. It’s a summary and exposition of Rice’s key chapters.


6. Monday, April 5, 2010
Class Notes 4/6

This post concerns many issues that Ede and Lunsford take up. You’ll find material that defines the term and social position of “author.” Where do you fit into that term? You’ll find material on the printing press and a discussion of the solitary author.

Monday, April 19, 2010

Story 4/20

Let's spend some time today collaborating on a paragraph that describes the whole of our story. We'll aim for a three-act structure:

Act 1 establishes the characters, the background for the conflict and the conflict itself. In so doing, this act establishes the type of story (tragedy, comedy, romance). Typically, this act includes a hook (an exciting opening bit) and what is sometimes called an "inciting incident": the event that pitches the protagonist's life out of balance and sets the conflict in motion.


Act 2 develops the characters by deepening the conflict and bringing it to the edge of crisis. This act is longer than Acts 1 and 2. Often, in the middle of Act 2, you'll find your character at her lowest point. She's ready to quit or die. Something happens to push her forward.


Act 3 concludes the story by narrating the crisis. Jane must confront her inner demons as well as the villain in the plot.

The ending, the denouement, provides a sense of resolution with a parting image or description.

Generally, Act 2 is twice as long as Acts 1 and 2. Thus, if we're thinking in terms of a paragraph: Act 1 = 2 sentences; Act 2 = 4 sentences; Act 3 = 2 sentences.





Here's a concise description of the Three Act Structure:

Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Death of the Author

On pages 88-90 in Ede and Lunsford's text, you'll find a discussion of Roland Barthes' essay "Death of the Author" and Michel Foucault's concept of the "Author Function," taken from his essay "What is an author?"

I'll use this blog post to add some context to the discussion of Barthes. (In an earlier post, you'll find information about Foucault's "Author Function."


These excerpts are taken from Roland Barthes well-known essay "Death of the Author." THe first excerpt is from the opening of the essay, the last two are from the last two paragraphs.



In his story Sarrasine Balzac, describing a castrato disguised as a woman, writes the following sentence: ‘This was woman herself, with her sudden fears, her irrational whims, her instinctive worries, her impetuous boldness, her fussings, and her delicious sensibility.’ Who is speaking thus? Is it the hero of the story bent on remaining ignorant of the castrato hidden beneath the woman? Is it Balzac the individual, furnished by his personal experience with a philosophy of Woman? Is it Balzac the author professing ‘literary’ ideas on femininity? Is it universal wisdom? Romantic psychology? We shall never know, for the good reason that writing is the destruction of every voice, of every point of origin. Writing is that neutral, composite, oblique space where our subject slips away, the negative where all identity is lost, starting with the very identity of the body writing.

....

Once the Author is removed, the claim to decipher a text becomes quite futile. To give a text an Author is to impose a limit on that text, to furnish it with a final signified, to close the writing. Such a conception suits criticism very well, the latter then allotting itself the important task of discovering the Author (or its hypostases: society, history, psyche, liberty) beneath the work: when the Author has been found, the text is ‘explained’—victory to the critic. Hence there is no surprise in the fact that, historically, the reign of the Author has also been that of the Critic, nor again in the fact that criticism (be it new) is today undermined, along with the Author. In the multiplicity of writing, everything is to be disentangled, nothing deciphered; the structure can be followed, ‘run’ (like the thread of a stocking) at every point and at every level, but there is nothing beneath: the space of writing is to be ranged over, not pierced; writing ceaselessly posits meaning ceaselessly to evaporate it, carrying out a systematic exemption of meaning. In precisely this way literature (it would bebetter from now on to say writing), by refusing to assign a ‘secret’, an ultimate meaning, to the text (and to the world as text), liberates what may be called an anti-theological activity, an activity that is truly revolutionary since to refuse to fix meaning is, in the end, to refuse God and his hypostases—reason, science, law.

…..

Yet this destination cannot any longer be personal: the reader is without history, biography, psychology; he is simply that someone who holds together in a single field all the traces by which the written text is constituted. Which is why it is derisory to condemn the new writing in the name of a humanism hypocritically turned champion of the reader’s rights. Classic criticism has never paid any attention to the reader; for it, the writer is the only person in literature. We are now beginning to let ourselves be fooled no longer by the arrogant antiphrastical recriminations of good society in favour of the very thing it sets aside, ignores, smothers, or destroys; we know that to give writing its future, it is necessary to overthrow the myth: the birth of the reader must be at the cost of the death of the Author.

Chaucer at the Court versus the Wanderer on a Mountain

Above you'll see fairly well-known replica of a painting by Ford Madox Brown titled "Chaucer at the Court of Edward III" (1868). If you're interested in the painting, you'll find more information about it at the Tate Museum website, where it is on display.

I want to compare the image below to Caspar David Friedrich's Wander Above the Fog (1818), which is on display at the Hamburger Kunsthalle, a major art museum in Hamburg, Germany.

I hope the paintings provide us occassion to think about creativity generally and, in our context, authorship particularly. Spend some time (say 5 minutes) looking at both paintings. How do these images differ in their presentation of creativity, artistry, and authorship? Let's assume these paintings offer metaphors for the creative process. Which metaphor seems more appealing to you as a writer? Why?




Monday, April 5, 2010

Class Notes 4/6

I'll use the following notes to organize our class discussion. They are based on Lisa Ede's and Andrea Lunsford's Singular Texts/Plural Authors:Perspectives on Collaborative Writing .


The Author: A Preliminary Definition


First, work with a partner to define the term "author." What is an author; how does "author" differ from "writer"? What sorts of texts do authors write? There are many texts in our world to which no authorship is attributed. Please list a few.


We'll put your responses in this space:

Authorship as recent cultural construct:

Ede and Lunsford note that “…the concept of individual authorship, which strikes most people as commonsensical but also somehow inevitable, is actually a cultural construct, and a recent one at that" (77).


What does it mean to say that authorship is a construct? If this is so, what are the implications of this idea?




Take a look at p. 82. You'll see Ede and Lunsford cite a definition of a book circa 1753:

Book, either numerous sheets of white paper that have been stitched together in such a way that they can be filled with writer; or a highly useful and convenient instrument constructed of printed sheets variously bound in cardboard, paper, vellum, leather, etc.. for presenting the truth to another in such a way that it can be conveniently read and recognized. Many people work on this book before it is complete and becomes an actual book in this sense. The scholar and the writer, the paper maker, the type founder, the typesetter and the printer, the proofreader, the publisher, the book binder, sometimes even the gilder and brass-woer, etc. Thus many mouths are fed by this branch of manufacture (Zinck col. 442, cited in and trans by Woodmansee, "Genius" 425).




Based on the above quotation, what can you infer about the "commonsensical" view of authorship in the 18th century?


So how did ideas of authorship change?


On copyright laws and intellectual property:

Before copyright laws could seem not only just but inevitable, society had to accept the idea that there is a crucial distinction between the production of literary texts and, say the raising and selling of apples and that the writer’s role in creating a book is somehow privileged—different from that of the printer or the bookbinder (82).



Those opposed to the establishment of copyright laws did so on two main grounds: (1) a book, being a physical object, becomes the publisher’s property (and then the buyer’s) once it is purchased from the writer; and (2), ideas, once expressed, belong to all, not just to the person who first articulated them (83).



The Printing Press:

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Johannes Gutenberg invents the printing press around 1440. Over time, this technology was improved. Whereas early manuscripts needed to be transcribed by hand, the press made reproduction available on a mass scale.







Illuminated Manuscript and Printing Press




Two videos about the book. The first one is funny.






Here's a short documentary regarding the rise of the printing press. It's available via our library's Films on Demand database. I've set up a URL but if it doens't work, just go to the database and search "Printing Press."

http://digital.films.com/play/FMEN4T


Based on what you've seen, what role did the printing press and copyright laws play in the development of the modern concept of "authorship." How does this concept differ from medieval or renaissance concepts of the the author?





Romanticism and the Solitary Author


This painting is by Casper David Friedrich (oil on canvas, 37.3 in × 29.4 in, 1818).
Take a moment to study it. What does the painting have to say about authorship and creativity?





Wordsworth and other’s descriptions of the author’s responsibility and achievement guaranteed a privileged place for both authors and their creations: “Genius is the introduction of a new element into the intellectual universe: or, if that be not allowed, it is the application of powers to objection which they had not before been exercised, or the employment of them in such a manner as to produce effects hitherto unknown (85).



What role does Descartes play in this story?

Take a look at the top of page 79 (top) and page 89 (middle). It seems pretty clear that Descartes' ideas, particularly the oft-referenced idea cogito ergo sum, are important to the development of contemporary ideas of authorship. Take a moment to review the material on the above pages; write a sentence in which you explain the the significance of Descartes to the definition of authorship.

Foucault's Author Function

Here's a useful link regarding the "author function"

Wednesday, March 24, 2010

Visual Rhetoric

Here's an interesting photo essay by David J. Staley. It appears from a recent issue of Kairos (14.2).

Try to follow the directions Staley gives you: watch the images over the span of several minutes. Try to read the images individually, collectively, and juxtaposed.

You may also be interested in Staley's discussion of this webtext.

Monday, March 22, 2010



This image is taken from Susan H. Delagrange's recent Kairos article When Revision Is Redesign: Key Questions for Digital Scholarship.

Notice how the author sketches out a strategy on paper and then translates the blueprint into a web-based environment.

Let's take a moment sketch out a few critical nodes for your project and figure out the relationships among them.

Monday, March 15, 2010

Constructing Web Texts

Here's a link to a page that offers some guidelines for accessing scholarly webtexts. All of these ideas do not apply to us, but they may serve as an interesting model for you. You might pay particular attention to developing a link strategy and/or a node strategy. You might also think about the relationship between the design of your page and the information on your page:

Assessing Scholarly Texts
by Allison Warner


This article is a substantial one, so I've included a few key quotations below. Do these assessment criteria help you to imagine your web-text more clearly?

Structural Design
Content Relationship
Navigational Design
Link Strategy
Node Strategy
Visual Design
Mutlimedia Incorporation







Structural Design

Multilinearity is one of the defining characteristics that distinguish a print-based text from a web-based text. An online text that incorporates a multi-linear structure—a structure comprised of multiple nodes with multiple pathways of access to those nodes—allows readers to choose their own paths through the text.


Structural Design
Content Relationship
Navigational Design
Link Strategy
Node Strategy
Visual Design
Mutlimedia Incorporation

Form/Content Relationship:

In a web-based text, by virtue of active participation in selecting links, readers are forced to look at the structure or form of the text rather than through it and to consider how the form is part of the message. According to Bolter (1991), if the form does not contribute to or enhance the message, but merely presents the content in a generic way, then the formal design is a waste of the new writing space afforded by the medium. A formal or form-based enactment of the content occurs when the organizational structure of the web-based text demonstrates and/or reinforces the content of the text.


Structural Design
Content Relationship
Navigational Design
Link Strategy
Node Strategy
Visual Design
Mutlimedia Incorporation


Navigation design

Authors of hypertextual pieces, such as webtexts, are challenged to find ways to orient readers in order to help them read efficiently and find their way around the text (Landow, 1989). Readers can become “lost in hyperspace”—a disorienting experience in which readers cannot determine where they are in relation to the information contained in the text, or how to return to a previously viewed node or find a node they think exists (Conklin, 1987). A significant method for enhancing reader orientation includes the incorporation of an overview or introductory node, textual or graphical webviews, and explicit navigation directions—instructions for moving through the text.



Link Strategy


Structural Design
Content Relationship
Navigational Design
Link Strategy
Node Strategy
Visual Design
Mutlimedia Incorporation

Links make possible the unique contextualization afforded by the online medium. Linking to external primary source material on the Web as well as internal contextualizing nodes can potentially enrich a reading of a text by offering additional layers of information for readers at varying levels of knowledge and interest in the subject. Regardless of where the links lead, readers are much more likely to view contextualizing material when it is easily and readily accessible by simply activating a link (Landow, 1989). The link is the main vehicle for movement within a web-based text. Clear navigation design is dependent upon the construction of an effective link strategy so that readers have informed options for moving through the text.


Structural Design
Content Relationship
Navigational Design
Link Strategy
Node Strategy
Visual Design
Mutlimedia Incorporation

Node strategy

From several web usability studies conducted in the late 90s, Jakob Nielsen and John Morkes (1998) concluded that substantial differences exist between reading from the screen and reading print from a page; hypertext authors attuned to these differences can take steps to enhance the reading experience. For example, Nielson and Morkes found that screen reading is slower than page reading; readers prefer to scan rather than read word for word from the screen; and readers prefer viewing short segments of text rather than scrolling through pages of text. A web-writing convention that has emerged from these reading analyses involves the process of “chunking” or separating content into small sections or nodes, which according to Nielsen, Morkes and others, provides a more reader-friendly experience within this medium.


Structural Design
Content Relationship
Navigational Design
Link Strategy
Node Strategy
Visual Design
Mutlimedia Incorporation


Visual design

As with navigation design, decisions regarding the visual design of a web-based text—including the manipulation of elements such as typography and color—depend on the goals of the text and the perceived needs of the reader. In other words, an effective visual design can support and enhance the meaning of the text; visual elements can be used rhetorically to gain the adherence of readers. Karen Chauss argued in “Reader as User: Applying Interface Design Techniques to the Web,” (incidentally, Kairos’s first Best Webtext award recipient), that the unique interface abilities afforded by the online medium require responsible use: “When writing for electronic media, writers can incorporate an array of graphic elements with greater ease than for print media. Lack of experience, coupled with ease of inclusion, can make for some wildly designed sites which distract rather than support the user.” Furthermore, as Pullman (2006) acknowledged, the new responsibilities for web authors necessitate judgment that may not be adequately cultivated: “Twenty years ago page layout and text design were the purview of graphic artists and printers; specialists with specialized knowledge.” Visual design, or “visual rhetoric” as it is referred to within the relevant literature, offers a broad range of information regarding the effective manipulation of typography, color, and layout.


Structural Design
Content Relationship
Navigational Design
Link Strategy
Node Strategy
Visual Design
Mutlimedia Incorporation


Multimedia incorporation

The ability to incorporate multiple media within a text is, without question, the most significant allowance of the online medium that cannot be replicated in print. The inclusion of audio streams, for example, either in presenting content or providing background sound can arguably add dimension to an otherwise single-sensory text. Similarly, the incorporation of animation, advanced graphics, or video streams can affect the reception of an argument based on a potentially charged pathetic appeal.

Hypertext critics commonly acknowledge that, because of the use of the hypertextual and/or hypermedia allowances of the medium, web-based texts demand new writing and reading strategies (Bolter, 1991; Lanham, 1993; Carter, 1997; Landow, 1997; Walker, 2006). These new strategies point toward non-textual ways of making meaning. For example, the ability for form to enact content within a web-based text suggests that formal design shares a semiotic role. Additionally, the advent of new media texts—online texts in which the written word is not the “primary rhetorical means”—changes the ways in which readers and writers understand and construct these texts (Ball, 2004). These new forms require readers to understand how non-textual elements combine with text to make meaning. The primary meaning-making methods in web-based texts fall into four categories: (1) purely textual, in which the meaning is derived solely from the text; (2) textual supplemented with visual elements that may enhance the meaning of the text; (3) textual combined with visual and other non-textual elements—video, audio, animation—that enhance the meaning of the webtext; and (4) textual combined with non-textual elements that comprise, or present, the meaning of the webtext.



Structural Design
Content Relationship
Navigational Design
Link Strategy
Node Strategy
Visual Design
Mutlimedia Incorporation

Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Rhetoric of Cool: Ch 2-5





Quotations and examples regarding chapters 2, 3, 4, and 5 from Rice's Rhetoric of Cool:

Chora
Appropriation
Juxtaposition
Commutation






Chora


“In digital culture, Ulmer writes, the topoi are replaced with Plato’s forgotten concept of chora, the open receptacle of meaning.” Chora, when updated for digital cutlrue, functions as an argumentative/narrative strategy b means of pattern making, pattern recognition, pattern generation” (Rice, Rhetoric of Cool 34).


In other words, think of chora as as a place (e.g. , your wiki) in which a particular “argumentative/narrative strategy” plays itself out via methods of appropriation and juxtaposition.

From Ch. 2 Chora:

While all reading and writing practices demand partiipation to some extent, writing multiple meanings simultaneously generates a method more conducive to digital culture, which itself (through Web, film, video, and other media) is constructured out of multiple texts and meanings that often overlap and interlink. “The past mechanical times was hot, and we of the TV age are cool” (Understanding Media 40). As McCluhan writes, the task is to transfer choral practices into pedagogy so that we not only understand what a cool medium is but that we write cool as well. “Our new concern with education follows upon the changeover to an interrelation in knowledge, where before the separate subjects of the curriculum had stood apart from each other (McLuhan Understanding Media 47 qtd. in Rice 35).


The best demonstration of choral moves on the Web can be seen (but not only found) in the hypertextual link that allows writers the capability of developing threads around single words or ideas, and that reuires readers to naviage these threads in various ways. The link is indicative of a new media push to reoganize space in terms of meaning contruction. (Rice, Rhetoric of Cool 35)



Note: For more information on the "interrelation of knowledge" see previous posts in "intertextuality."

Chora
Appropriation
Juxtaposition
Commutation





Appropriation

Appropriate:

Dictionary.com:
–adjective
1.
suitable or fitting for a particular purpose, person, occasion, etc.: an appropriate example; an appropriate dress.
2.
belonging to or peculiar to a person; proper: Each played his appropriate part.
–verb (used with object)
3.
to set apart, authorize, or legislate for some specific purpose or use: The legislature appropriated funds for the university.
4.
to take to or for oneself; take possession of.
5.
to take without permission or consent; seize; expropriate: He appropriated the trust funds for himself.
6.

to steal, esp. to commit petty theft.

Examples of Appropriation in Action:


1. . Examples from Music:




If you like music, here’s a good link regarding music sampling, which is an appropriative process:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sampling_(music)




Also, if you like Public Enemy, see Rice’s discussion of the rap “Caught, Can We Get A Witness” (68-9).


2. Satire:

Here is a Colbert Report satire from 5 March 2010:

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2010/03/05/colbert-treats-hannity-li_n_487078.html

Here is a Fox News report from 27 Sept. 2010:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kfy_i9SZomE&feature=related
So what do I do with appropriation?

3. The Mash Up:


If you look up “mash up” on youtube, you’ll find thousands of examples. Here is one involving the Wonderwoman, Superman and Company and the television show Friends.




So how do I use appropriation?


Mix it up. Find images from popular culture and or your own life. Look for patterns or interesting combinations:


“In order to apply this cool method of writing, students are asked to identify specific cultural influences from their own lives. These influences may come from background, school, history, politics, music, objectives they’ve owned, anecdotes, and a variety of other sources….[S]tudents appropriate these influences from their original contexts…. Students then present and juxtapose these influences in order to find a pattern” (Rice, Rhetoric of Cool 71).




Chora
Appropriation
Juxtaposition
Commutation




Juxtaposition






From dictionary.com:

–noun
1.
an act or instance of placing close together or side by side, esp. for comparison or contrast.
2.
the state of being close together or side by side.

Juxtaposition and Appropriation are related issues, which is why they appear in sequential chapters. For example, images that are appropriated are often juxtaposed. But sometimes, as the image above indicates, juxtaposition is just part of life.

“The challenge for composition studies is to translate the theoretical principles of juxtaposition to a pedagogy appropriate for digital writing. This kind of writing would ot analyze juxtapositions found in either popular media or professional discourse and report on their rhetorical effectiveness but would produce a writing comprised of juxtapositions. It would be, therefore, performative….[P]atterns motive readers and writersto find unrealized connections among disparate events and material things. [Composing by juxtaposition] favors discovery over the restricted topic sentence since writers composing with juxtapositions do not begin with an understanding of what they will write about. Nor do writers concern themselves with mastery of a given category (science), subject matter (film), or already establishe d belief (topos) Instead, writers writers look for ways to juxtapose from a variety of categories and subjects…in order to invent” (Rice, Rhetoric of Cool 91).


Chora
Appropriation
Juxtaposition
Commutation




Commutation



"Commutation is the exchange of signifiers without concern for referentiality" (93).





As an example of commutation, Rice disucsses images from Norman Rockwell and Andy Warhol.

















To a certain degree, either image could be used or discussed in commutational terms. As Rice's examples show on page 108, the questions concerning a famous Rockwell painting (Triple Self Portrait) tend to prompt thesis-driven writing. Rice's implied claim, via the famous Monroe images, is that Warhol prompts viewers to understand a subject from multiple angles and with multiple interpretations.


Here's another famous Warhol, Double Elvis





Rice writes, "No better figure could be used for commutation than Elvis, whose image is easily commutated from film to film (Elvis as scuba diver/Elvis as car driver)....Warhol's writing with Elvis in 1963 is an important moment in the rhetoric of cool because this writing situates this supposed cool figure (Elvis Presley) as a cool form of writing (commutation) (108).

Chora
Appropriation
Juxtaposition
Commutation

McCluhan Understanding Meida

This is a class project on McCluhan's Understanding Media.

It's a bit on the long side, but at 3:00, you'll see a clear distinction between hot and cold media:

Digital Essay Example

This is a digital/video essay on the rhetorical nature of signs that advertise "authentic" food choices (e.g., "Authentic Mexican Food"

http://kairos.technorhetoric.net/13.1/disputatio/walls/index.htm

Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Large Blocks of Text

Interesting Onion article. Does this piece suggest some limits to the digital essay?

http://www.theonion.com/content/news/nation_shudders_at_large_block_of

Monday, March 8, 2010

Juxtaposition

Here is a Colbert Report satire from 5 March 2010:

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2010/03/05/colbert-treats-hannity-li_n_487078.html


Here is a Fox News report from 27 Sept. 2010:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kfy_i9SZomE&feature=related

The Medium is the Message

Here's an interesting project by a college class:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MLRd99jKKzo&feature=related

Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Cut Up Method

Here's a neat web-based program that does the cut up method for you. Not quite as cool as scissors, I suppose, but still fun:

http://www.bluestwave.com/toolbox_cutup.php

Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Photo Essays

For those of you interested in image-based writing/composition, here is a link to Time Magazine's photo essays:


http://www.time.com/time/photogallery/0,29307,1933377_1975848_last,00.html

Tuesday, February 23, 2010

More on the pharmakon

Here's a youtube video (about ten minutes) which both explains some information about the pharmakon and also exemplifies Rice's ideas regarding the "rhetoric of cool." (See page 3 in his text.)

Does this video give you any ideas for our next project?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6dI8RHdao8w

Monday, February 22, 2010

The Pharmakon

In Rhetoric of Cool, you'll find a reference to the word "pharmakon."

I thought this website might help to clarify the curious tension in the word (remedy and poison). Can you think of examples where the poison is the cure?



The Pharmakon

Excerpted from:

http://www.cobussen.com/proefschrift/200_deconstruction/220_undecidables/221_pharmakon/pharmakon.htm


[1] No single word in English captures the play of signification of the ancient Greek word, pharmakon. Derrida traces the meanings assigned to pharmakon in Plato's dialogues: remedy, poison (either the cure or the illness or its cause), philter, drug, recipe, charm, medicine, substance, spell, artificial color, and paint. The word pharmakon is overdetermined, signifying in so many ways that the very notion of signification gets overloaded. A translation problem? Yes and no. In choosing one meaning translators often decide what in Plato's texts remains undecidable. But as indicated above, the problem is inherent in its very principle, situated less in the translation from one language to another, than already within the Greek language itself. And adopted within philosophical discourse, pharmakon does not suddenly become unambiguous, ready and suited for dialectic operations. (In Phaedrus, Socrates tries to distinguish between two kinds of words, the unambiguous - words about which we all agree - and the ambiguous - words about which we are at variance. In Plato, Derrida and Writing, Jasper Neel argues that in fact there are no unambiguous words.) Instead, words like pharmakon threatens the philosophical process, threatens dialectics from within. Plato's text itself is thus already the battlefield of an impossible process of translation.
Plato's systematic and pure reasoning (followed by Platonism and the entire Western tradition of philosophy) experiences great difficulty with this undecidability. It wants to put a stop to this constant shift from one meaning to another and back again. Still, Plato cannot escape the ambiguity of pharmakon either. In Phaedrus, writing is first presented as a useful tool, a beneficial drug (pharmakon). It later proves to be a harmful substance, benumbing to the soul, memory and truth, a poison (pharmakon). In Phaedo, the reverse happens: first, the hemlock is presented to Socrates as a poison (pharmakon). Yet it is transformed, through the effects of the Socratic logos, into a cathartic power (pharmakon), helpful to the soul that it awakens to the truth of eidos.

Thursday, February 18, 2010

Found Poems

Your found poetry, drawn from works by Elizabeth Bishop, Allen Ginsberg and Michael Ondjaatje:

1.
Go fuck yourself with your atom bomb,
About the size of our abidance,
About the size of an old style-Dollar bill.
I lost two cities, lovely ones and vaster,
a water meadow with some tiny cows.

Heavens, I recognize this place. I know it.
Life and the memory of it cramped.

Two brush strokes each;
Your Uncle George, my Uncle George
Our visions collide.


2.

I can't stand my own mind.
I never knew him.
But we walk around a bit
life and the memory of it cramped.
Clear as grey glass.

I can't stand my own mind.
Buy a bottle, the hour badly spent.

"I'm too tall for you, Billy."
The art if losing isn't hard to master.
He was by then an alcoholic.

I'm sick of your insane demands.

You were a sunflower,
but go fuck yourself.

Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Intertextuality

Here is a useful site that describes the basic concepts associated with intertextuality. Check it out:

http://www.aber.ac.uk/media/Documents/S4B/sem09.html

Dialogism

For those of you looking for more info on dialogism, here's a detailed blog post on the subject:

http://realmixed.blogspot.com/2009/04/digital-literature-bakhtin-and-dialogic.html

We'll unpack some of this material in class on Th.

Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Class Notes

Here's a representation of our class discussion today:

Heteroglossia: Meaning is never singular but plural in nature. The "right" meaning depends on context, and no two contexts are the same.

Dialogism: Language is interactive. Every meaning affects every other meaning.

Intertextuality: You drew a Cartesian plane (x/y axis). Along X, you drew the writer and the audience; along the Y, you drew "TIME," with old texts at one end and current texts at the other end.

The basic idea was that meaning is influenced by the writer and the audience as well as all of the texts that have come before and all the texts at are being produced in the here and now.

Monday, February 8, 2010

Dialogism and Heteroglossia


I thought you might find the definitions of Dialogism and Heteroglossia useful:

A Few Key Terms Regarding the Collaborative Nature of Interpretation

See Fontaine and Hunter, p 9 for a brief summary.

Heteroglossia:

“The base condition governing the operation of meaning in any utterance. It is that which insures the primacy of context over text. At any given time, in any given place, there will be a set of conditions—social, historical, meteorological, physiological—that will insure that a word uttered in that place and at that time will have a meaning different than it would have under any other conditions; all utterances are heteroglot in that they are functions of a matrix of forces practically impossible to recoup, and therefore impossible to resolve" (Holquist 426).


Dialogism:

“Is the characteristic epistemological mode of a world dominated by heteroglossia. Everything means, is understood, as a part of a greaterwhole—there is a constant interaction between meanings, all of which have the potential of conditioning others. Which will affect the other, how it will do so and in what degree is what is actually settled at the moment of the utterance. This dialogic imperative, mandated by the pre-existence of the language world relative to any of its current inhabitants, insures that there can be not actual monologues" (Holquist 428).


Bakhtin. M.M. The Dialogic Imagination. Tras. Caryl Emerson and Michael Holquist. Ed. Michael Holquist. Austin: U of Austin Press, 1992.

Intertextuality



You will notice that Fontaine and Hunter provide a brief summary of Bruffee's article on p. 7. They extend Bruffee's ideas with a discussion of Mikhail Bakhtin (next post) and Julia Kristeva on pp 8 and 9.

I thought this passage from Douglas Eyman might inform your understanding of intertextuality:


"Perhaps the most obvious theory that hypertext embodies and makes explicit is Julia Kristeva's (1986) notions of intertextuality: Kristeva, influenced by the work of Bakhtin, charts a three-dimensional textual space whose three "coordinates of dialogue" are the writing subject, the addressee (or ideal reader), and exterior texts; she describes this textual space as intersecting planes which have horizontal and vertical axes:

'The word's status is thus defined horizontally (the word in the text belongs to both writing subject and addressee) as well as vertically (the word in the text is oriented towards an anterior or synchronic literary corpus) . . . each word (text) is an intersection of words (texts) where at least one other word (text) can be read . . . any text is constructed as a mosaic of quotations; any text is the absorption and transformation of another. (p. 37)

Essentially, every text is informed by other texts which the reader has read, and the reader's own cultural context. (emphasis added, http://english.ttu.edu/kairos/1.2/features/eyman/julia.html)



So how does "intertextuality" shape your interpretation of the image of above? If you're interested to learn more about Marcel Duchamp's famous "Fountain," this link may offer you a good departure point: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fountain_(Duchamp)

Douglas Eyman. "Hypertext And/As Collaboration in the Computer-Facilitated Writing Classroom." Kairos 1.2. http://english.ttu.edu/kairos/1.2/binder.html?features/eyman/index.html.

Thursday, February 4, 2010

"The Doctor and the Doctor's Wife"

First, let me say that I appreciate your good with with the responses to Hemingway's story. Brendan brings up a good point on his blog. To paraphrase: Interesting story, but what does it have to do with collaborative learning?

Building off the work of Thomas Kuhn, Richard Rorty, Stanley Fish, Bruffee argues that "knowledge is established and maintained in the "normal discourse" of communities of knowledgeable peers" (640). Fish, he notes, goes so far as to claim that "'interpretive communities' are the source of our thought."

These points lead me to several questions:

Are we, in this class, a functioning interpretive community? With regard to Hemingway's story, what does "normal" discourse look like? Finally, if new knowledge is created by way of "abnormal discourse"(see pp. 647-8), what would that look like?

Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Colbert Report and Wikipedia

Check out this link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20PlHx_JjEo&feature=related

I wonder if Colbert's argument about the dangers of knowledge as consensus informs our discussion of Bruffee, Rorty, and Kuhn?

Monday, February 1, 2010

Cogito Ergo Sum

A funny video regarding Descartes famous contribution to philosophy. The video includes some cursing, so you've been warned.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BHihkRwisbE&feature=related

And here's another, which relates Decartes to the popular film "The Matrix"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lEr8hnvzeHU

Monday, January 4, 2010

Bruffee: "Collaborative Learning and the 'Conversation of Mankind'"


I usually make some notes prior to teaching, so I'll just use this blog as a way to make these notes accessible to you.

1. Page 636: Why collaborate?

Bruffee sets up a problem. Basically, he feels like collaborative learning (group work in class, peer tutors, peer evaluations) works in these revolutionary ways, but he's had mixed success with the practice. Collaborative learning, thus, is like a set of tactics. He wants a theory by which he can figure out when and how to implement this or that tactic.

2. Page 639-41: Talk, Inner Speech, and Writing

These pages basically summarize and respond to Vygotskty's influential work Mind and Society. Think of this way: You ever talk to yourself? Sure you do and you've been doing it since you were a child and no one but your parents understood you. This "inner speech" is our brain's way of problem solving. But where did inner speech come from? It seems logical to speculate that it comes from other people. We hear others and take in their language. Then later, we use that language for our purposes. "Thought," says Bruffee, "and conversation tend to work largely in the same way."

You might see in this passage echoes of North. He too emphasizes the role of talk in the writing center. You talk so as to create an effective conversation with the writer. This writer then internalizes this talk and uses it as inner speech. This inner speech is then "made public and social again" (641) in the form of writing (or more conversation).

642-47: Normal Discourse

How do you know your talk makes sense (or will make sense) to others? Mostly, you rely on the fact that your talk adheres to a whole range of accepted conventions. "Normal discourse is what William Perry describes as discourse in the established contexts of knowledge in a field, a discourse that makes effective reference to facts as defined within those contexts."

So here we get deeply social definition of "facts," right? (B. calls knowledge a "social artifact" [646].) You have a field (biology, anthropology, etc.) and you have people talking, writing, and using inner speech to figure out problems. But what counts as a problem? What counts as a good answer? What counts as accepted, as controversial, as old hat?

The answer (on about p. 644) comes in the form of knowledge (aka interpretive) communities. Groups of experts talk about problem X and solution Y all the time. They agree and disagree. They locate stable knowledge and they identify dubious claims. The stable knowledge becomes "normal discourse."

644: So what does this have to do with peer tutoring and writing consultancy?

Bruffee claims that all you are members (experts) in your own local knowledge communities, and the rules for making knowledge are not all that different. In addition, you have a good sense of the conventions (expectations) of academic knowledge communities, even if you are not an established member of this or that community.


647: Abnormal discourse

Hey, wait a minute, you say. Suppose that no one agrees with the stuff I'm saying but suppose also that I'm right? Would it then be the case that "knowledge" is actually false knowledge and that my words get ignored by the idiot masses in their "knowledge communities."

Yes. That happens a lot, unfortunately, which is why we must be ever on the lookout for "abnormal discourse," which is a phrase Bruffee borrows from the philosopher Richard Rorty:

"If, as Rorty suggests, knowledge is a social artifact, if knowledge is belief justified through normal discoruse, then the generation of knowledge, what we call creativity, must also be a social process [...]. But the discourse involved...cannot be normal discourse, since normal discourse maintains knowledge. It is inadequate for generating new knowledge" (647).

648: The Role of Abnormal Discourse in Peer Tutoring

Collaborative learning and the concepts of "normal/abnormal" discourse change the way one things about knowledge, teaching, and learning.

If knowledge is just "there," then your job is to learn it and quit being ignorant. Your job is not, necessarily, to question knowledge, to communicate it, and certainly not to create it.

But knowledge, in this argument, is social. It does not come from a higher power nor does it come from proximity to a "great mind" (see p. 649). Collaborative learning--as a social act--challenges the authority foundation on which most knowledge rests (teachers, schools, government, and other relevant institutions and their representatives).

According to Bruffee, teachers and peer tutors, in their best manifestations, operate as "conservators and agents of change."

Teaching--or peer tutoring--writing, therefore, means engaging writers in a conversation about what is true, meaningful, and important, especially when that writing seems "abnormal," for it is in abnormal discourse that new knowledge is made.